I need your professional opinion !

[ProudM3]

Hello everyone
I made a cover of a movie soundtrack entirely on PA800. Since there are geniuses here on that topic, I'm interested in your opinion on that track I made. What is good, what is wrong, how can I improve it, what should I have done and how should I have done it. Thanks in advance.

Here is the track: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=edIF2wYe6TQ