Opinions Welcome

Mike-K · Post by **Mike-K** » Wed Feb 27, 2008 8:55 pm

I'm interested in your opinions about mix and structure in this new tune
I just finished last night.

Any critique welcome!

Dancing With You

Thanks,
Mike

EDIT: thanks for moving the post to the right place. Sorry about that!

Pecca · Post by **Pecca** » Wed Feb 27, 2008 9:32 pm

Sounds nice in the sonic mix but i would cut the lead sequence parts.
My personal taste tells me to divide the them a little more.
The harmonica should perheps have shorter seqences and perhaps a little more structure to it. Make it less of an improvisation is my suggestion.

You might emphasize the bass and drums for a few bars and let the harmonica / flute rest... Then build it up again with a flute sequence (or harmonica)

Otherwise it had a nice mellow vibe to it

JonSolo · Post by **JonSolo** » Thu Feb 28, 2008 1:43 am

Yea I agree with Pecca. I think he is saying that there needs to be a distinctive lead melody...something we can grab and hold onto the entire song.

But it is a nice soft jazzy track. Very relaxing.

Solo

Mike-K · Post by **Mike-K** » Thu Feb 28, 2008 5:17 am

Thanks a bunch, guys! That's great feedback!

Mike