1st song on the emx ~the 1st wave

xbubbax · Post by **xbubbax** » Thu Aug 07, 2008 2:13 pm

hope you enjoy,
i effed up a lil bit on the transition, bit it comes together.

plz let me know for critique

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=u6HPH4HF6XM

xbubbax · Post by **xbubbax** » Thu Aug 07, 2008 4:54 pm

im impatient

zalo · Post by **zalo** » Thu Aug 07, 2008 10:27 pm

patience

not everyone is checking this site every couple hours

i feel like the song would come together more if you had some kind of lead synth line

or even a bass line

something to create more of a structure

also i would recommend practicing the song several times before recording it

it seemed like you were unsure of what came next

xbubbax · Post by **xbubbax** » Fri Aug 08, 2008 11:42 am

yea i know what u mean on the bassline thing.
it was just a 1st run at things. also the recording thing is just for fun....its more of a recorded progression....but just wanted some feedback....thanks zalo

musikmachine · Post by **musikmachine** » Fri Aug 08, 2008 12:35 pm

I'll check it out later. I just uploaded a track as werll so check it out and let me know what ya think.

xbubbax · Post by **xbubbax** » Fri Aug 08, 2008 4:35 pm

cool not a prob

X-Trade · Post by **X-Trade** » Fri Aug 08, 2008 5:35 pm

The bit where you dropped the filter over the whole track on the KP seemed a bit... bland...
I mean its a cool effect but much better if you for example swept the filter up slowly or something.
watched the video yesterday but I believe this was somewhere in the second minute?

Other than that... yeah its quite cool.... just very disjointed and repettitive and undeveloped...
Not dissing, I can see the potential and only time will allow you to develop your own personal style

travisthered · Post by **travisthered** » Sat Aug 09, 2008 12:43 am

It seems like you could have a cool track if you worked it out some more... From 1:30->2:00 I was expecting something to go off in the low end and i wasn't really satisfied with that off beat kick solo...

X-Trade wrote:The bit where you dropped the filter over the whole track on the KP seemed a bit... bland...
I mean its a cool effect but much better if you for example swept the filter up slowly or something.

I agree, It was from 2:37-2:48, WAY to long and again there was no climax at the end.

musikmachine · Post by **musikmachine** » Sun Aug 10, 2008 12:03 pm

Not bad for a first run. Good intro there, could be leading into a dnb track.

I agree with what's already been said, think about your timing and use of fx to make a track more interesting and not incidental.

If you tighten up on the timing and add ze bass you could have nice techno track here. Good effort for a first run.

Milhouse · Post by **Milhouse** » Mon Aug 11, 2008 12:39 am

Reminded me of 1991.

travisthered · Post by **travisthered** » Mon Aug 11, 2008 1:37 am

Milhouse wrote:Reminded me of 1991.

lolz?

musikmachine · Post by **musikmachine** » Mon Aug 11, 2008 7:47 am

travisthered wrote:
Milhouse wrote:Reminded me of 1991.
lolz?

Can't touch this! $\:D/$

xbubbax · Post by **xbubbax** » Mon Aug 11, 2008 7:09 pm

thats funny....

Milhouse · Post by **Milhouse** » Mon Aug 11, 2008 11:48 pm

musikmachine wrote:
travisthered wrote:
Milhouse wrote:Reminded me of 1991.
lolz?

Can't touch this! $\:D/$

Close, but that was 1990!!

I remember dancin to that in my zubas!!

travisthered · Post by **travisthered** » Tue Aug 12, 2008 12:02 pm

Milhouse wrote:
Close, but that was 1990!! I remember dancin to that in my zubas!!

The magazine says 1991...