Wolf-Ray - Mnml Tech - August 2011

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Wolf-Ray - Mnml Tech - August 2011

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I was trying out the minimal genre based off the tricks in this article:

http://www.soundstosample.com/blog/pro- ... ction-tips

Here's my submission:

http://soundcloud.com/wolf-ray/mnml-tech
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Nice little dance tune. I think it all sounds good...but it needs to go to that extra level. You can hear it coming with some nice effects you add in the song that fade in and get louder, but then that's it. There needs to be a really strong kick coming in at those points...where it goes BOOM, BOOM, etc. You know, like at a club.

That's all I'd suggest. Nice! :)
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I like what you have here, I will agree that the bottom needs more of a thump. Also, the ending is where it sounds like it's gonna finally take off on a melody, I wanted that to start up a new thematic thing. I like the spatial soundscape you have created though. IT has a cool vibe.
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