my first all external synth song

[mr.carter]

This is my first song in which I composed only using an R3, microKORG and *gasp*alesis micron, using ableton.

I would love to hear your feedback.
I lack the knowledge when it comes to proper song progression and arrangement. I lack the knowledge of when i've done too little,or when i've done too much. Any critiquing will be appreciated.
thanks

side note:
I use to make music using reason, but I really prefer using a tangible synth over software. I must admit, though, there are some advantages to using software synths that I wish i had when I was making this song.