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Opinions Welcome
Posted: Wed Feb 27, 2008 8:55 pm
by Mike-K
I'm interested in your opinions about mix and structure in this new tune
I just finished last night.
Any critique welcome!
Dancing With You
Thanks,
Mike
EDIT: thanks for moving the post to the right place. Sorry about that!

Posted: Wed Feb 27, 2008 9:32 pm
by Pecca
Sounds nice in the sonic mix but i would cut the lead sequence parts.
My personal taste tells me to divide the them a little more.
The harmonica should perheps have shorter seqences and perhaps a little more structure to it. Make it less of an improvisation is my suggestion.
You might emphasize the bass and drums for a few bars and let the harmonica / flute rest... Then build it up again with a flute sequence (or harmonica)
Otherwise it had a nice mellow vibe to it

Posted: Thu Feb 28, 2008 1:43 am
by JonSolo
Yea I agree with Pecca. I think he is saying that there needs to be a distinctive lead melody...something we can grab and hold onto the entire song.
But it is a nice soft jazzy track. Very relaxing.
Solo
Posted: Thu Feb 28, 2008 5:17 am
by Mike-K
Thanks a bunch, guys! That's great feedback!
Mike